这是我写的一篇英语短文,希望大家帮我改改错.

这是我写的一篇英语短文,希望大家帮我改改错.
It is a great honour to have you here today.To me,try to write in English is a big chanllenge.Thus,there will be a lot of mistakes in my articles.So I hope you can help me to correct my mistakes.I will glad to accept your suggests.You know your suggests are to my articles what teachers' comments are to students' homework.Your encouragement is the best support for me .Form now on ,I will write my articles in here.I hope you can read and correct them.Please attention them in time.
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全新赤裸 幼苗

共回答了12个问题采纳率：91.7% 举报

1.挑战是challenge,你多写一个n
2.suggest是动词,名词是suggestion
3.这句:You know your suggests are to my articles what teachers' comments are to students' homework.
改成：Your suggestions on my articles are the just like the teachers'.
4.这句:Your encouragement is the best support for me .
改成：Your encouragement will give me great motive power.
5.from now on笔误吧
6.这句:I will write my articles in here.
改成：I will write my articles here.
7.这句:Please attention them in time.
改成：Please pay attention to them in time.
8.I will BE glad.

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猪是的读来过反 幼苗

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1"try to write in English is a big chanllenge"中try应改为trying；
2”Thus,there will be a lot of mistakes in my articles.So I hope you can help me to correct my mistakes”中的Thus和So都有”因此”的意思，所以二者用词重复；

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雨蒙蒙9 幼苗

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It is a great honour to have you here .As for me,trying to write in English is a big chanllenge.Thus, a lot of mistakes will be found in my articles.I hope that you can help me to correct my mistakes....

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无敌泰托啦 幼苗

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It is a great honour to have you here today. FOR me,tryING to write in English is a big challenge. I THINK there will be a lot of mistakes in my article. I hope you can help me WITH correctING my mist...

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快乐相随1 幼苗

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To me,try to write in English is a big chanllenge
主语可以是动词不定式或动词ing，这句这样就少了主语。
I will glad to accept your suggests.
will be/ glad to
suggests改为suggestion
Form now on - From now on ...

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21732174 幼苗

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It is a great honour to have you here today.For me,try to write in English is a big chanllenge.Thus,there will be a lot of mistakes in my articles.So I hope you can help me to correct them.I will be g...

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顺便看一下 幼苗

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第二句——[try]改为trying;[chanllenge]应为“challenge”;
第三句——[Thus]意为“那么”，建议改成“So”;
第二行末——[will glad]中间+be;
第三行初——[suggests]是动词，应改为“suggestion”名词格式;
第四行尾——[Form]应该是From;
最后一行——[in]可以不用加;

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