英语翻译尊敬的签证官,申请人XXX,护照号XXXXXX,于几月几号递交了他们的德国签证的申请,到现在已经N个工作了,他们

Dear Visa officer,
The visa applicants xxx,who's passport number XXXX,submitted their visa to Germany on xxx of xxx Month,till now xxx working days have passed.Therefore it is hope you can speed up the process of approval so that they may have them the soonest because they also need to apply for visa to other countries.Your attention is highly appreciated.

楼主你好，我是这样翻译的，你参考一下吧：
Dear visa officer, applicant XXX, passport number XXXXXX, on several several monthly number submitted their German Visa application, now has N work, they also do other country's visa, please expedite your entertained at the time, I hope to get a visa. Thank you

Dear sir ,
Applicant:XXX
Passport number:XXXXX
These applicants applied their Germany Visa on XXX ( 月）XX（日），but many days have been passed , they haven't got their visa yet . Please procee...

Dear visa officers :
XXX,passport no.XXXXXX, has submit his application for German visa on X, (March),2012. But, until now, X business days have passed, there is no result. I need to apply for the visas of another countries, please reply me ASAP. Thank you!