帮忙看看有什么错误,怎样修改?I live in a beautiful city, There are high mo

I live in a beautiful city, There are high mountains and buildings, clean water and air, beautiful flowers, fresh and tender grass. So there are many visitors came here, including some foreigners very friendly, some of them from American, some from South Africa, some are fromAustralia...

The Fuchun River runs through Tonglu City, north of the river with the hustle and bustle of the street, both the practical goods, native to Tonglu or funny gadgets are very attractive; south of the river is not distinct and green mountains and rivers. A wild profusion of vegetation in the mountains, bamboo forest, is a good place for self-cultivation.

The Fuchun River is Tonglu's mother river,it provides us a living water. In the Yuan Dynasty painter Huang Gongwang's "dwelling in the Fuchun mountains", will be able to understand how beautiful it.

The beauty of Tonglu needs to find out for yourself.Welcome to my beautiful hometown - Tonglu.