英语作文:Strong points and points

My strong and weak points
Well,sometimes it is hard to recognize your own strong points and to acknowledge your own weak points.Most of the time it is easy to realize other people's shortcomings.
I think my strong points are self-reliance,firmness of purpose,and being result-oriented.If I see the goal I can approach my aim step by step.I also can motivate myself and other people,but I can't motivate groups of people.I can organize things,for example,I organized my big wedding.
And as for weak points,I think that sometimes I'm quite impulsive and don't want to endure some people.For example,if my boss shouts at me,I cry and then quit this work.It sounds normal to quit a job where your boss is shouting at you,but there is a problem to find a job with a polite and calm boss.