我写的短文,找出错误,改正Our math teather Mr.Li is ill in the hospital.l

Our math teather Mr.Li had a illness and she's in hospital now.
I planed to visit my math teacher with my classmates. And i want to
buy a scarf for her(him). but my classmates said it is not very special.thay want to buy a big cake for her(him).i thought that is a good idea.
We'll see our math teacher on SUN.And we're going to get to the hospital by bus.I hope our math teacher feels better soon ...

(BORING 啊...这文章真是木额)

Our math teather Mr.Li is illing in the hospital. l have a plan about see him with classmates. I want to buy a scarf for my math teacher. But classmates said it is not special. They want to buy a cake...

in hospital 住院
in the hospital 在医院里

Our math teacher Mr Li was (应该用过去史，因为他过去得的病）ill in hospital(in the hospital 是在医院，不一定是住院，而in hospotal是得病住院）I had a plan to see math teacher with classmates.I want to buy a scarf for my math reacher .Bu...

这是改后的.
Our math teather Mr.Li is ill in hospital. l have a plan about seeing him with classmates. l wanted to buy a scarf for my math teacher. But classmates said it was not special. They wanted t...