mofei7757
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Understanding the past facilitates us with problem-solving, helps us acquire knowledge from the theoretical to the practical, broadens our horizons and saves our time by improving efficiency.
第三人称单数你都忘记写了.还有这个句子有点太长了,最好分开剪短一点写,我只给你改了一些语法错误,比如 help + verb 原型.efficiency最好写一下是什么的efficiency,然后acquire knowledge from the theoritical to the practical建议写成transfer the theoritical knowledge into practical uses之类的.
我的建议是这样的:
Understanding the past can facilitate us with problem-solving and help us better transfer the theoritical knowledge to practical uses. It also broadens our horizons and saves our time by improving efficiency in decision-making and other aspects of our lives.
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嗯 谢谢你的建议! 我是想用facilitate 作为动词 然后后面所有都用动名词的形式来做平行列举,不过我对help的用法的确不太清晰。
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那你也可以继续那样子写,只是我觉得有点长,一般不会写那么长,不过你看咯,你的句子嘛~ 满意请采纳哦