帮忙改下我写的英语小作文吧describe an event you feel disappointedWell, to

Time passing,the memory of the first time i failed in my maths still remains.I liked maths as much as loved my maths teacher,Miss Shi.I did very well in the past.But at a time,i failed in maths,which made me cry for a long time.Miss shi saw me crying in the corner of the classroom.She came to me and said she believed me i can do much better,because I,the best one in her eyes,worked hard and was enthusiastic in maths at all time.So i think,we shouldn't cry for a single fail.Try our best and find the mistakes.We could be what we want to be.

best student is me??
应该说me is student

I still remember the first time I failed （in)my math test
But I failed this time=(but during that time of my failure)
I can't help with my sad tears 你想说你伤心的眼泪情不自禁吧？
起码也要换下主语额
it can...

不需要修改了，我认为写得很好