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It is no doubt that in both the 15th and the 18th European world had developed dramatically ranged from art and sculpture to policy and philosophy.The 15th was a humanism time and the 18th was regard as The Age of Reason.Although they were similar in the sense that free people’s thought and attitudes,there were significant changes in the way Europeans viewed the world.
Free from the Middle Ages which was an absolutely religious time,Europeans began to observe the world in a more realism and humanism eye.They focus on men.No matter what problems they solved,the basic purpose was to convinced and satisfied humans.From most of the 15th art products we can found that the very goal that artists willing to reach were to make the figures they created vivid,as if they can touch or breathe.
However,in the 18th people had already thought gradually from human-center to rational.Since they also learn things from observation as the 15th people,they concerned things more form reason side rather than human one.
This significant change led to different ideas in policy.Let’s see the Utopia that created by Sir Thomas More.It was an idealistic society and can just exist in people’s minds.Compared to the political theory made by Montesquieu,More one is too far away to reach.The political thought between the 15th and the 18th was a big change.
Another change was people’s attitude towards religion.In the 15th,though humanism had widely spread people still religious in god.Many paintings in this time were about Mary and Jesus,which means that God and their religions were still deeply rooted in the heart.But in the 18th religion was began to be suspected and doubt.The idea of comparative religion was appeared.
How and why these changes come about?In my point of view,it was an inevitable change in people’s attitude because this means a sense of development in human society and history.Above all,humanism was anyway a kind of mentalist while the age of reason emphasis more on an objective materialism.After released from the middle age and with the stoical economy grew,a strong need of observing on human itself was appeared.
Under the influence of Renaissance,learners know more about people and other creatures in this world.Their eyeshot was enlarging and became wider than before.Apart from close observation,they had a deeper reflection and a more objective solution.They paid more attention on man’s ideology and the whole social phenomenon rather than on art or sculpture or things on the surface.In one word,the changes in the way European viewed the world come about because human being had continualness development and progress 题目.