huazhimin103
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Dear Mr Yin
I have heared that there will be a Music Festival hold in our school.I love music and willing to learn more about this area through this activity.In the Music Festival there will also be lots of other students who loves music and I want to make friends with them.If there is any chance you would let me join in this Festival,I will do my best in the activity.
Your Student,Tom
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文笔差一点,尽量多用初一上册英语书第10单元的!!你写的太好了!!但是也谢谢你!!麻烦改一下!
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。。。。。。。我不知道初一英语书第十单元都有啥,我重写你看看这样行么? Dear Mr Yin I have heared that there will be a Music Festival hold in our school.I love music and I often listen to pop music at home.I want to makes friends with students who also like music.I like take music class in school and I want to learn more outside of class.I hope you can let me jion this activity.Thank you very much. Your Student,Tom