英语作文Don`t cut in line

i've went though a special day.when i got home after school,i was told that my dad was in hospital for some serious disease.without hesitate,i hurried to the hospital.obviously,time is presing!so i just cut in line when waiting for the bus.because of it,i was blamed by others.and i realised that its bad-mannered to cut in line at any time.from then on ,i decided to call myself to order when doing every thing.
这篇怎么样?建议结合自己的情况修改下哦!：）

CUTTTTTTTT IN LINE OVER.