求写一篇essay看图...写得好,你点一下这个图不就变大了吗?

我选了8th Grade,给你写了一个,关于推荐电脑产品的.你看看,有什么问题在百度Hi里找我.
Dell Inc.is world class PC and laptop producer.We believe in product quality,social responsibilities,and customer satisfaction.It is also one of the best PC producer in the world.Anybody who is interested in buying a new PC or laptop will be looking for 3 important things:performance,after-sales service,and customization,and Dell can provide all.
Performance is one of the most attractive feature that customers are looking for.The design of Dell computer screen is able to meet all levels of the demands ranging from mini screen to High Definition.In addition,its CPU adopts the most advanced technology compatible with the most current gaming industry,and it is capable of running the most updated softwares.Moreover,the life of Dell computer and performance level is usually extended for the automatic health check and disk cleaner run by its system.
Other than performance,after-sale service is also another concern from customers.Customers are encouraged to sign up for the 1 year to 3 years warranty at minimum payment,and they hold the right to deliver the broken devices to any branch for repair during the warranty period.Also,Dell promotes environmental protection culture,which is to apply compensation to customers for recycling used Dell computer for new one.More importantly,due to the gaming and programing purpose,Dell computer keeps providing its customer with regular update to keep the software system most updated.
Not only does Dell provide the best after-sale services,it also enhences customer value by customization.Customer varies from one to another,and different customers have different expectations and focus.Dell computer has designed different color and desktop theme for male,female,young,and old users.It generally serves a purpose to meet different people's demand.In addition,performance level is also customized.Customers can choose from different spec that designed specifically for gaming purpose or other uses so that they are able to use such device more efficiently.
After all,Dell computer has many distinctive and competitive advantages that separate itself from other PC makders.It will continue on the production of quality PCs and services.At customer's best interest,Dell is highly recommended.

你这个图太飘渺了吧
谁看得见啊
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你这个图太飘渺了吧