帮忙修改下一个小英文短文Dog Are People’s Friends Dog is a kind of honest
帮忙修改下一个小英文短文
Dog Are People’s Friends
Dog is a kind of honest and friendly animal.There are three reasons why dog is very popular in people’s life.First of all,dog can be guard for us .As we know,dog have the natural ability to keep house of its owners safe.They can send out warning to burglars who try to break into the house,and sometimes even fight against them.Secondly,dog can help people to get rid of loneliness.Accompanied by dog,people do not feel lonely because of dog’s human nature.Sometimes people talk to dogs though they could not understand.Moreover children are pleased while they are playing with dogs.At last,dogs of special training for people living have import function.Seeing Eye dog are absolutely necessarily for blind man.The dog who trained by police can look for keys for cracking a criminal case because it has sensitive olfaction.To sum up,dogs are people’s faithful friends.Dogs give us much happiness; we should take more care of them and love them.
Dog Are People’s Friends
Dog is a kind of honest and friendly animal.There are three reasons why dog is very popular in people’s life.First of all,dog can be guard for us .As we know,dog have the natural ability to keep house of its owners safe.They can send out warning to burglars who try to break into the house,and sometimes even fight against them.Secondly,dog can help people to get rid of loneliness.Accompanied by dog,people do not feel lonely because of dog’s human nature.Sometimes people talk to dogs though they could not understand.Moreover children are pleased while they are playing with dogs.At last,dogs of special training for people living have import function.Seeing Eye dog are absolutely necessarily for blind man.The dog who trained by police can look for keys for cracking a criminal case because it has sensitive olfaction.To sum up,dogs are people’s faithful friends.Dogs give us much happiness; we should take more care of them and love them.
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我觉得你写得很好,没什么可修改的,除非你想在用词造句上更进一步.
改一小点吧.本人非英语专业,仅供参考!
1.Dog Are People’s Friends ----> Dogs Are People’s Friends
2.At last,dogs of special training for people living have import function.------>At last,dogs which have been specially trained play important roles in people's life.
3.Seeing Eye dog are absolutely necessarily for blind man.------->Seeing Eye dogs are absolutely necessary for blindmen.
4.The dog who trained by police can look for keys for cracking a criminal case because it has sensitive olfaction.------>The dogs which have been trained can crack down criminal cases because of its acute sense of smell.(look for )
改一小点吧.本人非英语专业,仅供参考!
1.Dog Are People’s Friends ----> Dogs Are People’s Friends
2.At last,dogs of special training for people living have import function.------>At last,dogs which have been specially trained play important roles in people's life.
3.Seeing Eye dog are absolutely necessarily for blind man.------->Seeing Eye dogs are absolutely necessary for blindmen.
4.The dog who trained by police can look for keys for cracking a criminal case because it has sensitive olfaction.------>The dogs which have been trained can crack down criminal cases because of its acute sense of smell.(look for )
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