一段英语文字纠错,看看有没有语法错误和用词不规范
一段英语文字纠错,看看有没有语法错误和用词不规范
Life is reallyhard,so sometimes we will ask ourselves what we are living for.The 14 dayshas witnessed Jang Tea-san’s grow and leaves us a question about the reasons ofliving.
After fightingagainst greed,hypocrisy and injustice,Jang Tae-san plans a new life with thepeople he likes.He says:“There are some people I love in the world.It is thereason why I live.” Tae-san has found his life goal,and it’s our turn toanswer this question now.
Life is reallyhard,so sometimes we will ask ourselves what we are living for.The 14 dayshas witnessed Jang Tea-san’s grow and leaves us a question about the reasons ofliving.
After fightingagainst greed,hypocrisy and injustice,Jang Tae-san plans a new life with thepeople he likes.He says:“There are some people I love in the world.It is thereason why I live.” Tae-san has found his life goal,and it’s our turn toanswer this question now.
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Life is really hard,so sometimes we will【删除will】 ask ourselves what we are living for.The 14 days has witnessed Jang Tea-san’s grow【改为growth】 and leaves us a question about the reasons of living【the reasons of living改为reasons for living】.
After fighting against greed,hypocrisy and injustice,Jang Tae-san plans a new life with the people he likes.He says:“There are some people I love in the world.It is the reason why【删除why】 I live.” Tae-san has found his life goal,and it’s our turn to answer this question now.
Life is really hard,so sometimes we will【删除will】 ask ourselves what we are living for.The 14 days has witnessed Jang Tea-san’s grow【改为growth】 and leaves us a question about the reasons of living【the reasons of living改为reasons for living】.
After fighting against greed,hypocrisy and injustice,Jang Tae-san plans a new life with the people he likes.He says:“There are some people I love in the world.It is the reason why【删除why】 I live.” Tae-san has found his life goal,and it’s our turn to answer this question now.
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