关于"City problem"为题的一篇英语作文

City Problems
Nowadays, millions of migrant workers flock into cities in search of jobs and better
living. However, with the sharp rise in the urban population, many problems arise in t
he development of cities.
Firstly, cities become more and more crowded, putting much pressure upon transportation, housing, sanitation, education, employment and so on. City services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point. Secondly, a growing number of private cars emit huge amount of carbon dioxide, leaving the air mercilessly polluted. What is more, the city is also threatened by rising crime. Not a single day passes without the report of someone being robbed, kidnapped or murdered. Last but not least, city-dwellers are not only separated from the natural world but also isolated from each other, even not knowing the name of their next-door neighbor.
All these problems have harmed the attractiveness of the city. Unless there is some improvement, more and more people may seek to live in the suburbs.（翻译：现在,有很多外来的的工作者聚集到城市中来寻找工作机会和更好的生活. 但是,随着城市人口的急剧增加,在城市发展过程中很多问题也显现出来.首先,城市变得越来越拥挤,交通,住房,医疗,教育,求职等的压力越来越重.城市的服务和公共设施已经达到饱和状态.第二点,数量日益增长的私人用车也制造出过量的二氧化碳,空气遭到污染.而且,由于刑事案件的增多,城市也受到了一定的威胁.每天都会有抢劫,绑架,以及谋杀等的相关报告.最后非常重要的一点事,城市居民不仅远离了自然环境,而且也远离了彼此,他们甚至不知道自己邻居的姓名. 所有的这些问题都使得城市的吸引力在大大降低.除非这些问题会得到一定的改善,否则越来越多的人会选择住在郊外.）
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Nowdays,as the big cities are developing rapidly,more and more people are flowing into the big cities.With the development ,the problems are emerging quickly,such as the city congestion,pollution,some unsustainable factors,and so on. In these all problems,congestion is obveriously.For example,the traffic congestion.There are always traffic jams on the road.It takes us too many hours to arrive where we want to just in a city.And there are so many person on the bus that it is almost hard to take breath.Because of this,going out shopping or doing anything become a difficult thing.Meanwhile,there is a lack if hourse in the big city.Because of too many people,the average square of each person is very small.And the prices of the hourse in these big citied are extremely high.Another big problem in the big city is that there are more and more unsustainable fators exist.Having too many people will occur frequently,such as robbery,rape cases. So,in my opinion,the local government should increase some laws and strenthen the ablilty of regulation to control the people who intend to enter the city.One city must have its own capacity,if population in it is over its ablilty,the problem will get more and more worse.