看看这篇英文自我介绍有没有问题?

看看这篇英文自我介绍有没有问题?
Teachers,good afternoon.Allow me to briefly talk about myself.
My name is *** graduated from the ****schools.Tourism now studying at the school
I was a character,cheerful boy,so my hobbies is extensive.Sporty.In my spare time likes playing basketball,table tennis,volleyball,skating.When a person like the Internet at home,or a personal stereo.Not like too long immersed in the world of books,and family members have told me,Laoyijiege is the best.Talking about my family,then I will talk about my family has.Only three people my family,my grandmother,grandfather and my own.My grandfather is a engineer,I am very severely on peacetime,the Church me a lot.Grandma is a very kindly for the elderly,care for my life in every possible way.Therefore,I have no parents in their care,childhood and growth were full of joy.
I like this hotel management professional,because I like to live in a strict order of the management environment.I have my professional self-confidence and hope,as long as the efforts will be fruitful,this is my motto.Since I chose this profession,I will follow this path,effort,perseverance path.
Thank you teachers.I finished presentation.