求英语作文 the best ____i know

In my opinion,the best father I know is my father,who is tall and handsome.He is different from other children's father,because he hates smoking and won't drink too much.Though he is busy with business,he often has dinner with my mother and I.what's more,when I make mistakes,he will tell me something to make me realize my error instead of hitting me.I love my father,he is the best father I know.
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