my holiday during this holiday i went to dalian . i went to there by trian. i collected some shelfs.(贝壳是这个单词吗?) and last week i bought some books.they can enrichied my knowledge and brodened my mind. i think i was very happy. 这篇文章为本人的原创,是按照我们六年级(我本人就是)的讲法写的,写得比较仓促,不过语法什么的,句型应该都满的. 应该是达到了你的要求吧(我们老师也就是让我们这样写的)