英语作文改错,跪求高手解答,(同学作文中的错误,老师让改正)

英语作文改错,跪求高手解答,(同学作文中的错误,老师让改正)
1. There are about ninety percent international conferences is held in English.
2. With the integration of the world have been strengthened, English is becoming more and more important.
3. English is becoming more important in nowadays, as we know, English is the most widely used language today and the most English-speaking countries are developed countries, we depend on these countries to strengthen our country’s economy, consequently is this a reason why people today are likely to learn English well.
4. Of cause, except the reason above, there are still other reasons. Such as, as time goes on. The economy of American is becoming more and more strong in the whole world. And people all over the world want to migrate to American. So that they could get more chances to make more money or show themselves.
5. Nowadays, college graduates find jobs is more and more difficult. First it because the number of college students is increasing. It has many students graduate every year. Secondly, with technologies developing some position need machines not people. So the position available to is less, regardless the number of college students is increasing.
6. On the one hand, college graduates are becoming more and more, and the challenge among them is becoming bigger and bigger, so it’s difficult for them to find a job. On the other hand, some college graduates have a limited ability, and it can’t content the job’s need.
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matschao 幼苗

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1、is改成are;2、have改为having;3、去掉in,因为nowadays本身是副词,the most English-speaking countries 应该去the吧,表示"大部分", is this改为this is;4、最后一句去掉that;5、college graduates find jobs is more and more difficult建议改成 finding jobs is more and more difficult to college graduates ,然后 it because……去掉it,然后It has many students graduate every year建议去掉It has ,So the position available to 后加get;

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