On the contrary,the valuable points of reaching many student
On the contrary,the valuable points of reaching many students’ dream to complete their college study in hometown and facilitating the development of our city will work for a period of time.
语法没问题,可是一般人没有这么说话的吧!头重脚轻,结构有点混乱! On the contrary,it will work for a long time to realize many students' dream of fulfilling their colledge study in hometown and facilitate their city development.