有哪位大神帮我看看这篇英语的自我介绍呀~

有哪位大神帮我看看这篇英语的自我介绍呀~
看看语法有没有什么错误之类了,先谢过了
First I want to tell you ,we can learn together.I feel very happy.As you can see ,I was a transfer student.Although I fail in my senior entrance examination.But this did not bring me down,I'm not a loser.
My teacher once said to me:'when you have choices,choose the best.when you have no choices,do your best.'
I have to do the best.
Well,hark back to the subject.
I'm a outgoing girl.I love all the things I like.My favorite color is green.Because it represents new.Also,I love music,especially country music,so I like Taylor Swift very much.
Finally,I want say,I can lose suffer a big.But I will stage a comeback.
Hope we can get alone happy.
Thank you for listening to my self introduction.
lnforever 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

lewqq 幼苗

共回答了22个问题采纳率:86.4% 举报

First I want to tell you ,that we can learn together I feel very happy.As you can see ,I was a transfer student.Although I failed(因为是过去式) in my senior entrance examination,but it(代指failure) did not bring me down,I'm not a loser.
My teacher once told me:'when you have choices,choose the best.When you have no choices,do your best.'(顺便提一句,我喜欢你们老师这句话!)
So I have to do my best.
Well,let's hark back to the topic.
I'm an outgoing girl.I love all the things I like.(我总觉得“我爱所有我喜欢的东西”,这句话是废话.不过你喜欢的话也可以加上)My favorite color is green.Because it represents new and flesh.Also,I love music,especially country music,so I like Taylor Swift very much.
Finally,I want to say,I can bear to suffer a big failure.But I will stage a comeback in the end.( 东山再起~我喜欢)
Hope we can get alone happy.
Thank you for listening to my self introduction.

1年前

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我还是好孩子 幼苗

共回答了204个问题 举报

First I want to tell you , we can learn together. I feel very happy. As you can see , I was a transfer student.Suggest to change to: I am a transfer student. I am happy to come here to further my stud...

1年前

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剑雨飘香1225 幼苗

共回答了2个问题 举报

写的挺好,语法没什么错误,很通顺。

1年前

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魔子龙 幼苗

共回答了4个问题 举报

I feel very happy改为I feel so happy
I fail in my senior entrance examination改为I feil in my senior entrance examination
But this did not bring me down改为But it did not bring me down
I want say改为I want to say
Hope we can get alone happy改为I hope we can get alone happy

1年前

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