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1)It improves the material of clothing and footwear continually.这句不如改为:It improves clothing and footwear materials constantly.这样句子更简洁,continually是继续的意思,constantly是不断的意思.
2)provide a snug feeling to people,这句中更符合英语习惯用法的应该是provide people with snug feeling.
3)by DuPont manufacturer这里的manufacturer完全没有必要.Du Pont是世界著名品牌,当然是制造商.是否可改成was first introduced by Du Pont
4)but also lasting fit for people.这是not only……but also……的用法,所以last和provide应该是并列的,用动名词不对,应改成
but also last fit for people.
5)Girls might be love Lycra 这里出现了两个动词,be可不要;love虽然可作名词,但be 后面应该是表语,所以一定要用也只能是be loving.另外figure改成body curves如何?
6)The other point is kinesiology is involved in most tools第一个is后面应加一个that,否则两个is靠的很近,读起来别扭.
7) more fit for movement of people.这里movement前面宜加一个the
8)after use modern technology.use在after后面不能用动词原形,应该用动名词using;另外after也欠妥,不如用through,即through using modern technology,因为在使用过程中也感到舒适的.
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