请给这段文章润色 First of all,modern technology brings a more comfor

请给这段文章润色
First of all,modern technology brings a more comfortable life to people.It improves the material of clothing and footwear continually.These novel materials which are used in cloths provide a snug feeling to people.For example,Lycra is an innovative fiber with incredible stretch,which was introduced by DuPont manufacturer.It provides not only softness and comfort,but also lasting fit for people.(Tide.com) Girls might be love Lycra because they can show their slim figure in cold winter.The other point is kinesiology is involved in most tools which are indispensable for people.This technology helps tools like mouse and keyboard more fit for movement of people.It is able to reduce the tiredness which comes from the regular operation.So,people feel more comfortable after use modern technology.
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1)It improves the material of clothing and footwear continually.这句不如改为:It improves clothing and footwear materials constantly.这样句子更简洁,continually是继续的意思,constantly是不断的意思.
2)provide a snug feeling to people,这句中更符合英语习惯用法的应该是provide people with snug feeling.
3)by DuPont manufacturer这里的manufacturer完全没有必要.Du Pont是世界著名品牌,当然是制造商.是否可改成was first introduced by Du Pont
4)but also lasting fit for people.这是not only……but also……的用法,所以last和provide应该是并列的,用动名词不对,应改成
but also last fit for people.
5)Girls might be love Lycra 这里出现了两个动词,be可不要;love虽然可作名词,但be 后面应该是表语,所以一定要用也只能是be loving.另外figure改成body curves如何?
6)The other point is kinesiology is involved in most tools第一个is后面应加一个that,否则两个is靠的很近,读起来别扭.
7) more fit for movement of people.这里movement前面宜加一个the
8)after use modern technology.use在after后面不能用动词原形,应该用动名词using;另外after也欠妥,不如用through,即through using modern technology,因为在使用过程中也感到舒适的.

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首先,现代技术带给了人们一个更加舒适的生活,它不停地提高了衣服和鞋类的原料.这些新颖的原料被使用于衣物的上给人们提供了舒适的感觉.举个例子,莱卡(一种面料)是一种创新的纤维拥有难以置信的弹性,是被DuPont公司所介绍的.它不但提供了柔软与舒适,还可以保持人们的身形.女孩们也许会喜欢莱卡因为它们可以展示女孩们苗条的身材在寒冷的冬季.其他的观点认为人体运动学是复杂的在许多方面,但对...

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It improves the material of clothing and footwear continually. - It is constantly improving the material for clothing as well as footwear.
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