英文作文(不懂文法)帮我看一下有没有错,怎样才能用不同句型表达? Dear worried mother, I am a

Dear mother,
Don't be worried.
I am a student fond of the Internet,too.Like you,my parents are also worried about me.But you know everything has its two sides,because there are a great many advantages of surfing the Internet and a lot of websites serve the purposes of education,so students can make the best of the Internet for learning.For instance,they can ask questions immediately through the Internet and search for information for self-study.
I suggest you should tell your son about your worries directly and make a deal with him instead of forbidding him from using the computer,but tell him to surf the Internet not more than two hours each day after finishing the homework.It is useless blaming him for playing computer but trying to reason him into study.
Yours sincerely ,
Chris Wong

翻译出来是这样，肯定有问题，别急，耐心改一下
亲爱的母亲担心，
我是学生发现互联网也。喜欢你，我的父母也对我的。但也有优势，互联网和一些网站的教育目的。学生可以充分利用互联网进行学习。例如，他们可以提出这样一个问题立即通过互联网和查阅的资料自学。
我建议你跟你的儿子，以表达你的担心。您可以处理他说，使用电脑不超过2个小时后，每天的功课。这是无用的指责他玩电脑，但尝试理由...

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