英语改错第四部分写作（共两节,满分35分） 第一节短．文改错（共10小题；每小题1 分,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改
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第四部分写作（共两节,满分35分） 第一节短．文改错（共10小题；每小题1 分,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作 文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文 ***有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两 处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改.增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/）,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉.修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词 下面写出修改后的词.注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一 词； 2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处 起）不计分.this autumn,my class went to the seaside to go camp．we arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains．we set up our tents on the sandy beach,when night fell we started a fire to give us light and kept us warm．all my classmates sat around them,talking,singing and laughing．several hours late． robert and i went back to the tent to have the chat．we stayed up all night．we found that we two had a lot of in common．for example,we all like the same singers and have great enthusiasm for physics．the fire and stars saw our happiness．what i wished time would stop at the moment!
第四部分写作（共两节,满分35分） 第一节短．文改错（共10小题；每小题1 分,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作 文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文 ***有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两 处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改.增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/）,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉.修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词 下面写出修改后的词.注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一 词； 2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处 起）不计分.this autumn,my class went to the seaside to go camp．we arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains．we set up our tents on the sandy beach,when night fell we started a fire to give us light and kept us warm．all my classmates sat around them,talking,singing and laughing．several hours late． robert and i went back to the tent to have the chat．we stayed up all night．we found that we two had a lot of in common．for example,we all like the same singers and have great enthusiasm for physics．the fire and stars saw our happiness．what i wished time would stop at the moment!
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This autumn,my class went to the seaside to go camping．We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains．We set up our tents on the sandy beach,when night fell we started a fire to give us light and to keep us warm．All my classmates sat around ,talking,singing and laughing．Several hours later． Robert and I went back to the tent to have the chat．We stayed up all night．We found that we two had a lot of in common．For example,we both like the same singers and have great enthusiasm for physics．The fire and stars saw our happiness．how I wished time would stop at the moment!
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