如何用英语来描述一个循环?贫困的恶性循环vicious circle of poverty. 贫穷导致农村贫困家庭的孩子

如何用英语来描述一个循环?
贫困的恶性循环vicious circle of poverty. 贫穷导致农村贫困家庭的孩子没钱上学,而想要从农村转移出去谋生又缺乏必要的知识和技能,于是仍然贫困,even worse
请帮我改改,是不是有哪里写错或者写的不好的,谢谢阿:
fundamentally, education-aiding-the poor breaks the vicious circle of poverty. Poverty leads to discontinuing schooling of the children from poor families. At the same time, they are lack of necessary basic knowledge and skills when they leave rural areas to make a better living. So they are still poor, even worse.
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Because (此处加上原因介词会让句与句之间有连接性和逻辑性)Poverty leads to discontinuing schooling for(将of 改成for) the children from poor families.However(不用同时而是转折),they (去掉are,lack of 本身已是动词) lack of necessary basic knowledge and skills when they leave rural areas for urban areas(加上去市区更符合逻辑) to make a better living.So they are still poor,even worse

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