牛人们,能帮改一下下面这篇文章（关于节约的）吗(只截取了开头两段)?
牛人们,能帮改一下下面这篇文章（关于节约的）吗(只截取了开头两段)?
From now on,I will start a discussion about saving.No sooner do we hear this title about saving about which we have been talking for a long time than all oi us will never feel tired to convey an unceasing flow of words.And now,I also want to spray some speeches towards it.
Given the scale of our country as large as the multitude of ants around sugar,the sense of saving resources can not be strongly too emphasized,though most of us regard our motherland as a fertile land with countless and inexhaustible natural resources.As a matter of fact,the materials property must be run out one day in the coming future
From now on,I will start a discussion about saving.No sooner do we hear this title about saving about which we have been talking for a long time than all oi us will never feel tired to convey an unceasing flow of words.And now,I also want to spray some speeches towards it.
Given the scale of our country as large as the multitude of ants around sugar,the sense of saving resources can not be strongly too emphasized,though most of us regard our motherland as a fertile land with countless and inexhaustible natural resources.As a matter of fact,the materials property must be run out one day in the coming future
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语法似乎还行,但经不起推敲.句法想复杂拉长却漏洞百出,不能达意.用词搭配尤其不地道.
吾大改之.
Right from here,I will talk about frugality.Once we hear such a topic,we are accustomed to expecting a long and tiring speech,which unfortunately,is also what I want to deliver right now.
Given the vast territory of our country,the importance of frugality can never be too emphasized,though most of us regard our motherland as a fertile land with inexhaustible natural resources.In fact,the material resources in the near future are about to be exhautsed.
吾大改之.
Right from here,I will talk about frugality.Once we hear such a topic,we are accustomed to expecting a long and tiring speech,which unfortunately,is also what I want to deliver right now.
Given the vast territory of our country,the importance of frugality can never be too emphasized,though most of us regard our motherland as a fertile land with inexhaustible natural resources.In fact,the material resources in the near future are about to be exhautsed.
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