以"welcome to our school"为题写一篇英语作文30-50词左右,

Our school is a boarding school.It is just like a big garden with lots of trees around it.There are nearly 1,000 students and 200 teachers in our school.You can see a big playground in the middle of the school campus.That's the place where we have sports of different kinds.We have several teaching buildings and an office building.In the teaching buildings,we also have chemistry lab,physics lab and the language lab as well.You can also find that our library is the best one among middle schools.There are thousands of books and magazines in it.Perhaps,the most exciting place for students to stay is the canteen where we can have lots of delicious foods.Meanwhile,I would like to say that our school is also like a big family with all the teachers and students living together.
恕我直言,一楼的作文错误不少,需改进.

Welcome to our school. First, let me show you round our school. Our school was built fifty years ago. Look, that is our classroom building. It is new. It was built last year. In front of it，there is a fountain and a garden. Look over there, it is the playground. We have all sports games in it. We have a new and big library. There are many kinds of books in it. We like reading there because it is air-conditioned. The most beautiful time is spring and summer. You can see so many beautiful flowers and grass everywhere. and you can see many girls and boys talking, playing or reading under the trees. I love my school so much.

给我加分吧！我在英语作文网上找的哦

Welcome to our school. Now, let me introduce our school to you. Our school name is shunshui middle school.The school gate faces south.beside the gate there are many bookstore and shop. The teaching ...