英语改错My hometown is a preet city ,so people there arekind and

英语改错
My hometown is a preet city ,so people there are
kind and polite.With coming of spring,grass and
trees turn green,and flowers grew in many colors.
In summer,the sea under the blue sky is even more
beautiful.After autumn arrives,the city looks as an
old man with leaves fallen from the trees.In winter,
a lot of white birds come to my city for food.I can
wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long
time.While they find fish come to the surface,they
fly down immediate and catch them without delay.
That is my city,and I love it so much.
每一行分别有一个错,有一行全对｛貌似这句话是矛盾病句,汗｝
难的可以说哈理由.