请牛人指点此句话有无语法错误?However,there is avsolutely no evidence provi

请牛人指点此句话有无语法错误?However,there is avsolutely no evidence provided that the
conclusion the arguer drawed build the next store in plainsville selling running shoes will bring the same profits as well.
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However,there is absolutely no evidence provided that the conclusion the arguer drawed build the next store in plains ville selling running shoes will bring the same profits as well.
有语法错, the arguer drawed是the conclusion的后置状语,但是它隔离了句子成分,无法使build the next store in plains ville selling running shoes 与the conclusion 构成定语从句,另外build the next store 不能做从句的主语,可以考虑改成不定式结构.
所以可以改成However,there is absolutely no evidence provided that the conclusion, drawn by the arguer, that to build the next store in plains ville selling running shoes will bring the same profits as well.

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