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A good father is a person who is responsive,benevolent,hard working and dignified.
father have to respone to his family.He must love his wife,respect and take care of his parants and his own children.
A father must had a benevolent feeling towards family and society.The member of the family will live happily with father's love.
To surport his family, a father must work hard to give his family a good and valuable's life.
A good father have to behave calmly and steadily when facing some problem.The way he solves a problem will affected his family's life.He must always looking smart and dignified so that his children will feel proud of him.
Being faith,honest,ethic and healthy are other conditions for a good father.
A good father , apart from setting good model to the kids, he should be taking care of society and love the country.

额，请具体说明字数，几年级的水平
看楼下写得很好噢，单词量挺大，有点自卑，不过还是硬着头皮写一篇吧。
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