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I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet.
My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.
试题分析:这是一篇话题作文。记述成长过程中的一件或是两件难忘的事,根据材料提示完成写作,并适当发挥。写作过程中注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如::used to“过去常常”;not...until“直到……才”;not...any more“不再”;grow up“长大”等以及一些复合句的使用。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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