书面表达(共1小题;满分20分)在阳光雨露里,我已长高、长壮,但这还不是全部,长大还应包括什么?是关

书面表达(共1小题;满分20分)在阳光雨露里,我已长高、长壮,但这还不是全部,长大还应包括什么?是关
书面表达(共1小题;满分20分)
在阳光雨露里,我已长高、长壮,但这还不是全部,长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是……,成长的点点滴滴,久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题,记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事,表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。
要求:1.请根据所给题目,用英语写一篇短文,不少于80词;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计算
I am not a child any more,

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I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet.
My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.


试题分析:这是一篇话题作文。记述成长过程中的一件或是两件难忘的事,根据材料提示完成写作,并适当发挥。写作过程中注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如::used to“过去常常”;not...until“直到……才”;not...any more“不再”;grow up“长大”等以及一些复合句的使用。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

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