英语短文改错Dear Ms Green,Now I had been back in China for nearly

英语短文改错
Dear Ms Green,
Now I had been back in China for nearly a month.I am always remembering the days when we spent together in Canada.I would like to thank you of your kindness and hospitality during my staying here.Ihope you and your family will come to China to travel when you have time.China is an amazed country,which has long history and rich culture.And there are many places of interests.You are sure have a wonderful time here.
In addition,our group photos have sent to you by email.You can find time to download it from the Web.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Ms Green,
Now I (1.have)been back in China for nearly a month.I am always remembering the days (2 that) we spent together in Canada.I would like to thank you (3 for)your kindness and hospitality during my staying here.Ihope you and your family will come to China to travel when you have time.China is an (4 amazing) country,which has(5 a) long history and rich culture.And there are many places of (6 interest).You (7 will) (8 surely) have a wonderful time here.
In addition,our group photos have (9 been)sent to you by email.You can find time to download (10 them)from the Web.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

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fanxiqian 幼苗

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Dear Ms Green,
Now I had been back in China for nearly a month. I am always remembering the days when
had--have
we spent together in Canada.I would like to thank you of you...

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第一行 had 要改成have 现在完成时 when 改成that 定语从句的关系代词而非关系副词
第二行 of 改成for
第三行 here 改成there
第四行 amazed 改成amazing 令人惊奇的
第五行 interests不用复数 表示名胜用place of interest sure后面加to
第六行 have后加been...

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Dear Ms Green,
Now (去掉now)I had been back in China for nearly a month. I am(去掉am) always remembering (去掉ing)the days when we spent together in Canada.I would like to thank you of (for)your kin...

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Dear Ms Green,
Now I had(改成have) been back in China for nearly a month. I (am always remembering)(改成always remember) the days when(改成that) we spent together in Canada. I would like to thank yo...

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我爱袁佳 幼苗

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I would like to thank you of your kindness and hospitality during my staying here 改成:i 'd like to thank of your kindness and hospitality during my staying there.
You are sure have a wonderful time...

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