请各位帮我看一下这个英文短文改错,感激不尽

请各位帮我看一下这个英文短文改错,感激不尽
Susan is seventeen year old.And she is very busy.She never has enough time for that she wants to do.Like many other girls about her age,she spends hours on the telephone,talks to her friends.She often goes out on the weekends,and she looks after children for other families to get some money. But,of course,during the school years she herself has a lot homework to do.During the football season,Susan is more busier than usual.She and others pretty girls are cheer leaders.
cey006 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

luxes 幼苗

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year--years.for (something)thatLike--likingweekends--weekendherself 去掉more去掉others--other 一共有多少错误呢?所以改了这么多。望采纳。^_^

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ailce_07 幼苗

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Susan is seventeen years old.And she is very busy.She never has enough time for what she wants to do.Like many other girls at her age,she spends hours on the telephone,talking to her friends.She often...

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日月名明 幼苗

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把year改为years,that改为what,把about改为as,把talks改为talking,把on the weekends改为on weekends,把for改为of,把herself删去

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