yaya_he
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挺不错的.至少能拿个20分以上,要我打可能23左右.基本意思表达很好,语法和单词也不错,但是就是有些用法稍微有点感觉怪怪的.(别嫌我啊)
就这两句
“ Despite the discouragement, I tried to get mother's supportness” change to "Despite her disapproval, I tried to get her support."
"as the college entrance exam draws nearer and nearer." change to "draws near"
"my eagerness to join in them grows stronger and stronger" personally speaking, I would use the word “my interest in these clubs grows stronger and stronger"
"showed her understanding to me" change to ”showed understanding“
还有,用Mum好像更好啊,难道您整天管妈妈叫 "母亲”么?
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supportness我查了下,没有这个词,低级错误啊。 我感觉写作文是不是要正规点,所以用了mother,答案上的范文也用的是mother。不过似乎mom是好点。 那几个句子你指出的不当都很好,让我豁然开朗,下次我一定注意,不过想写得特别地道很难啊,就几十天就高考了。 佩服你的语感!
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yaya_he
高考别紧张啊,其实可以看出来你英语底子不错的(嗯,原来高三的水平就是这样的)。其实语言吧,要真学好还挺难的,我们语言老师对于语感以前说过,“你用中文怎么说,你就用英文怎么说。” 希望能帮到你,祝高考有好成绩啊。