感激不尽!I want to join the English club in our school's new vic

感激不尽!I want to join the English club in our school's new vice presid
感激不尽!
I want to join the English club in our school's new vice president.I worked as a monitor of the class in junior school.So I'm more good at the terns of management.I have a bright and cheerful disposition,like getting along with people,If I can on the campaign.I will hold lectures and English parties.Let the student's know more about English.I will also hold debate and speech contest,makes the students more interested in English.I very hope run for vice president.If you choose me,I will bring you more.
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more good-better
like getting along: such as getting along
If I can on the campaign: If I can join the campaign
parties.Let the student's:parties, and let the students
speech contest, makes the students: speech contest, making students
I very hope run for vice President: I hope I can be the Vice President very much
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