自己写了篇英语作文,详细的帮我批下并告诉我语法怎么错了!
自己写了篇英语作文,详细的帮我批下并告诉我语法怎么错了!
on the deveplo rapidly today's,the internet has been become the need of tool for people.but,it gace advantages and disadvantages.
on the hand,people think that the internet can increase of efficiency in study and work.because of it's very convenient.moreover,rich of resoures make people efficiency.on the other hand,because,the young man indulge in the internet's game.so people think that may influeace of learning.
in my opinion,with develop of society.the internet will be importance to daily life of people.young man should use of resonable the internet and on the way of used work and study more than play a internet's game.
on the deveplo rapidly today's,the internet has been become the need of tool for people.but,it gace advantages and disadvantages.
on the hand,people think that the internet can increase of efficiency in study and work.because of it's very convenient.moreover,rich of resoures make people efficiency.on the other hand,because,the young man indulge in the internet's game.so people think that may influeace of learning.
in my opinion,with develop of society.the internet will be importance to daily life of people.young man should use of resonable the internet and on the way of used work and study more than play a internet's game.
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第一句看上去就像机器翻译一样.是手写的么.
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With today's rapid development, internet has become the tool for people's needs. But it has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, people think that internet can increase the efficiency in study and work as it is very convenient and has rich resources. On the other hand, people easily indulge themselves in online games which may influence study and break daily schedules.
In my opinion, internet will be more important to people's daily life with the development of our society. However, young people should use resourceful interenet to work and study rather than just gaming.
尽量保留了你的原意。只对语法作了调整。供参考，希望能帮到你！
On the one hand, people think that internet can increase the efficiency in study and work as it is very convenient and has rich resources. On the other hand, people easily indulge themselves in online games which may influence study and break daily schedules.
In my opinion, internet will be more important to people's daily life with the development of our society. However, young people should use resourceful interenet to work and study rather than just gaming.
尽量保留了你的原意。只对语法作了调整。供参考，希望能帮到你！
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