请高手帮我指点一下,看一下错误之处

Last Sunday,my car broke down on my way back HOME.What MADE THINGS WORSE WAS it was raining HEAVILY and there was no one whom i could TURN TO.I decided to walk around before accepting THAT I'd have to spend the day in the car.Luckily,I didn't NEED to walk far before I FOUND a small house beside a river with light shone from the sitting room.

whom I could turn to;
before accepting the reality that I had to spend the day in the car;
I found a small house beside a river with a light shone from it.