帮忙修改英语 自我介绍Hi eveyone .My name is .so lucky I learned with y
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Hi eveyone .My name is .so lucky I learned with you together last semester.You've already known over me.Today I'm gonna to tell you about me that you don't know.I was born in small town.My parents are all farmers.So I'm a famer's daughter.I had begun to do the farm work when I was a little girl.About eight years old.I konw most of you were born in good families.And you are so yong than me.Maybe you've never experienced those.But I did.That was so hard.But also that was intresting.I planted rice seedlings,grew crops,potatos,all kinds of vegetables and kept chicken,ducks,and pigs.That made my childhood rich and colorful.The second thing that I'm gonna say is my little pets.I love cats,and I have 4 cats.If I suffer from loneliness,cats will make me comfottable.So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats.Cats compensated for lack of my life.I hope I can have all kinds of cats in my entire life.Anyway thank you for listening.I wish we could have a great time this term.
Hi eveyone .My name is .so lucky I learned with you together last semester.You've already known over me.Today I'm gonna to tell you about me that you don't know.I was born in small town.My parents are all farmers.So I'm a famer's daughter.I had begun to do the farm work when I was a little girl.About eight years old.I konw most of you were born in good families.And you are so yong than me.Maybe you've never experienced those.But I did.That was so hard.But also that was intresting.I planted rice seedlings,grew crops,potatos,all kinds of vegetables and kept chicken,ducks,and pigs.That made my childhood rich and colorful.The second thing that I'm gonna say is my little pets.I love cats,and I have 4 cats.If I suffer from loneliness,cats will make me comfottable.So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats.Cats compensated for lack of my life.I hope I can have all kinds of cats in my entire life.Anyway thank you for listening.I wish we could have a great time this term.
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Hi everyone.My name is .So lucky that I learnt with youtogether last semester.You've already known a lot about me.
Today I'm going to tell you about myself that you didn’tknow.
First,I was born in a small town.My parents are allfarmers.So I'm a farmer’s daughter.I had begun to do the farm works when Iwas a little girl of eight years old.I knowmost of you were born in good families.And you are so younger than me.Maybe you'venever experienced those,but I did.It was so hard,but interesting.I plantedrice seedlings,grew crops,potatoes and all kinds of vegetables,and keptchicken,ducks,and pigs.All these farm works made my childhood rich andcolorful.
The second thing that I'm going to say is about my littlepets.I love cats,and I have 4 cats.If I suffer from loneliness,cats willmake me comfortable.So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats.Cats compensated for lack of my life.I hope I canhave all kinds of cats in my entire life.
Anyway thank you for listening.I wish we could have a greattime this term.
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注：Cats compensated for lack of my life.这句话没看懂想说啥,所以没改.
Today I'm going to tell you about myself that you didn’tknow.
First,I was born in a small town.My parents are allfarmers.So I'm a farmer’s daughter.I had begun to do the farm works when Iwas a little girl of eight years old.I knowmost of you were born in good families.And you are so younger than me.Maybe you'venever experienced those,but I did.It was so hard,but interesting.I plantedrice seedlings,grew crops,potatoes and all kinds of vegetables,and keptchicken,ducks,and pigs.All these farm works made my childhood rich andcolorful.
The second thing that I'm going to say is about my littlepets.I love cats,and I have 4 cats.If I suffer from loneliness,cats willmake me comfortable.So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats.Cats compensated for lack of my life.I hope I canhave all kinds of cats in my entire life.
Anyway thank you for listening.I wish we could have a greattime this term.
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注：Cats compensated for lack of my life.这句话没看懂想说啥,所以没改.
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修正： The second thing that I'm going to say is about my littlepets. I love cats, and I have 4 cats already. If I suffer from loneliness, cats will make me comfortable. So I spend the whole weekend to be with my cats. Cats help me a lot to get rid of the loneliness. I hope that I can have all kinds of cats in my entire life. //增加already。 //按照意思，改成 Cats help me a lot to get rid of the loneliness. 猫帮助我摆脱孤独感。 //增加that （I hope that）。 补充一句： learnt 是 learn的过去式。 learned意思是博学的。 不过现在很多人也用learned表示learn的过去式，但是专业的用法还是要区分的。
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