★help:帮我把稿子弄得有点洋味.具体些(不用太具体)初中水平就好了!明天上午10:00先弄好~把改了的地方用红字标出
★help:
帮我把稿子弄得有点洋味.具体些(不用太具体)初中水平就好了!明天上午10:00先弄好~把改了的地方用红字标出
Thank you my parents
There are so many things in our lives we should give thanks.
Such as the air,the sunshine,our lovely friends and dear teachers.But the people i want to give thank to most are my parents.There are lots of stories among us.And now i'll tell you something which impressed me most.
Once when i was very young .My parents and i went boating.At first the waves were gentle.Suddenly a huge wave turned my little boat over and i fell into the water.My mother got worried and jumped into the water quickly without thinking.Everyone knew my mother could not swim.Myfather threw all the things with him and jumped into the water quickly.My mother and i were saved at last.On the band,My mother kept asking me :Are you OK?I got moved and cried in her hug.
I'm growing in the sea of love.
Thank you my dear mother.You are the greatest woman in the world.Even if i collect all the carnations all over the world.I can't express my thanks to you ,my love to you:My mother.
When i was in the kindergarden.My father liked to buy some chocolate for me.One day,i was eating happily.My father came in and i gave him a pice of it.My father said loudly:Oh!No!Honey,i don't like chocolate at all.Don't care about me .My little girl.
I began to know what's the meaning of dad's words until i was in school.My dear father you don't mean what you sid .You like chocolate but you love me more.
Now i want to give thanks to my parents.They are the greatest in the world.
How much i love you i can't say.
It's more than words can hold.
How much i love you i don't know.
You are with me when me i am happy or sad.
You sopport me in times good or bad.
But i can do noting for you.i just prey that my parents and all the parents around the world can have happy and healthy lives!
thanks
帮我把稿子弄得有点洋味.具体些(不用太具体)初中水平就好了!明天上午10:00先弄好~把改了的地方用红字标出
Thank you my parents
There are so many things in our lives we should give thanks.
Such as the air,the sunshine,our lovely friends and dear teachers.But the people i want to give thank to most are my parents.There are lots of stories among us.And now i'll tell you something which impressed me most.
Once when i was very young .My parents and i went boating.At first the waves were gentle.Suddenly a huge wave turned my little boat over and i fell into the water.My mother got worried and jumped into the water quickly without thinking.Everyone knew my mother could not swim.Myfather threw all the things with him and jumped into the water quickly.My mother and i were saved at last.On the band,My mother kept asking me :Are you OK?I got moved and cried in her hug.
I'm growing in the sea of love.
Thank you my dear mother.You are the greatest woman in the world.Even if i collect all the carnations all over the world.I can't express my thanks to you ,my love to you:My mother.
When i was in the kindergarden.My father liked to buy some chocolate for me.One day,i was eating happily.My father came in and i gave him a pice of it.My father said loudly:Oh!No!Honey,i don't like chocolate at all.Don't care about me .My little girl.
I began to know what's the meaning of dad's words until i was in school.My dear father you don't mean what you sid .You like chocolate but you love me more.
Now i want to give thanks to my parents.They are the greatest in the world.
How much i love you i can't say.
It's more than words can hold.
How much i love you i don't know.
You are with me when me i am happy or sad.
You sopport me in times good or bad.
But i can do noting for you.i just prey that my parents and all the parents around the world can have happy and healthy lives!
thanks
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A big thanks to my parents!
There are so many things in our lives we should give thanks to.
Such as the air,the sunshine,our lovely friends and dear teachers.But the people I mostly want to give thanks to are my parents.There are lots of stories about us.And now I'll tell you an incident that impressed me the most.
Once when i was very young,my parents and I went boating.At first the waves were gentle but suddenly a huge wave turned my little boat over and i fell into the water.My mother got worried and jumped into the water quickly without hesitating.Everyone knew my mother could not swim.My father threw away everything he had in hands and jumped into the water quickly.My mother and I were saved at last.On the board,My mother kept asking me :Are you OK?I was very moved and I cried while she was hugging me.
I'm growing in the sea of love.
Dear my mother,thank you.You are the greatest woman in the world.Even if I collect all the carnations all over the world.I can't express my thanks to you ,my love to you:My mother.
When i was in the kindergarden.My father liked to buy some chocolate for me.One day,i was eating happily.My father came in and i gave him a piece of it.My father said loudly:Oh!No!Honey,i don't like chocolate at all.Don't care about me .My little girl.
I didn't really understand dad's words until I was in school.My dear father,you don't always mean what you said .You like chocolate but you love me more.
My parents are the greates people in the world.
I can't say how much I love you
I don't know how much I love you.
You are with me when me i am happy or sad.
You sopport me in times of good or bad.
But i can do noting for you.i just pray that my parents and all the parents around the world can have happy and healthy lives!
sincerely,and another thanks
我改的可能不是最好的或者最正确的,可是你说想要洋味的~而且我也是中学生,
There are so many things in our lives we should give thanks to.
Such as the air,the sunshine,our lovely friends and dear teachers.But the people I mostly want to give thanks to are my parents.There are lots of stories about us.And now I'll tell you an incident that impressed me the most.
Once when i was very young,my parents and I went boating.At first the waves were gentle but suddenly a huge wave turned my little boat over and i fell into the water.My mother got worried and jumped into the water quickly without hesitating.Everyone knew my mother could not swim.My father threw away everything he had in hands and jumped into the water quickly.My mother and I were saved at last.On the board,My mother kept asking me :Are you OK?I was very moved and I cried while she was hugging me.
I'm growing in the sea of love.
Dear my mother,thank you.You are the greatest woman in the world.Even if I collect all the carnations all over the world.I can't express my thanks to you ,my love to you:My mother.
When i was in the kindergarden.My father liked to buy some chocolate for me.One day,i was eating happily.My father came in and i gave him a piece of it.My father said loudly:Oh!No!Honey,i don't like chocolate at all.Don't care about me .My little girl.
I didn't really understand dad's words until I was in school.My dear father,you don't always mean what you said .You like chocolate but you love me more.
My parents are the greates people in the world.
I can't say how much I love you
I don't know how much I love you.
You are with me when me i am happy or sad.
You sopport me in times of good or bad.
But i can do noting for you.i just pray that my parents and all the parents around the world can have happy and healthy lives!
sincerely,and another thanks
我改的可能不是最好的或者最正确的,可是你说想要洋味的~而且我也是中学生,
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