找错 明天要~There are four people in my family,my parents,my brot
找错 明天要~
There are four people in my family,my parents,my brother and I.My family is pretty good.I’m really happy.
My brother is shy,But he very funny.He likes sports,He favorite playing basketball.But he hates studying and his grades are bad.He like telling jokes.He always plays jokes on his friends and my family,and always makes us laugh.
My father was a staff.He doesn’t like watching TV,but he likes reading newspaper and read it every night.
My mother is a housewife.She has good habits.She likes eating vegetables and drinking milk every day.But I don’t like milk.It is awful.She likes watching Television at free time.She says it’s good for her to keep young and it can make her relaxed.
My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
刚刚写好的 你们帮忙看下有没有错的
There are four people in my family,my parents,my brother and I.My family is pretty good.I’m really happy.
My brother is shy,But he very funny.He likes sports,He favorite playing basketball.But he hates studying and his grades are bad.He like telling jokes.He always plays jokes on his friends and my family,and always makes us laugh.
My father was a staff.He doesn’t like watching TV,but he likes reading newspaper and read it every night.
My mother is a housewife.She has good habits.She likes eating vegetables and drinking milk every day.But I don’t like milk.It is awful.She likes watching Television at free time.She says it’s good for her to keep young and it can make her relaxed.
My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
刚刚写好的 你们帮忙看下有没有错的
赞 gdhygk 幼苗
共回答了16个问题采纳率：93.8% 举报
1.第3行:But he very funny改为
But he is very funny.
2.第4行:favorite改为is fond of(喜爱).
3.第4行:his grades are bad.改为his grade is bad.
4.第5行:He like telling改为He likes telling
5.第7行:My father was a staff.改为My father is a staff.
6.第7行:read it改为reads it
7.倒数第2段的"My families" 改为My family
8.最后一段的each person 改为every person
其他的都没有错.
But he is very funny.
2.第4行:favorite改为is fond of(喜爱).
3.第4行:his grades are bad.改为his grade is bad.
4.第5行:He like telling改为He likes telling
5.第7行:My father was a staff.改为My father is a staff.
6.第7行:read it改为reads it
7.倒数第2段的"My families" 改为My family
8.最后一段的each person 改为every person
其他的都没有错.
1年前
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WANSC51638 幼苗
共回答了140个问题 举报
But 小写
but he is very funny
his favorite
My families are always doing what is best for me
改成 What my family always do is for me.
but he is very funny
his favorite
My families are always doing what is best for me
改成 What my family always do is for me.
1年前
0
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