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幼苗
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1` make you composition logical and coherent.
use some link word such as "furthermore","otherwise","nevertheless"
and they will enable your composition tobe easily grasp.
2` use correct grammer
i recommend you to read a authentic grammer book,that will help you a lot.
3` nice sentence structure.
read more and you`ll find sentence structures that wirters like to use.collect them and use them in your passage.
4` good vocabulary
words like"good" can be replace by "marvellous","fabulous"
words like"important" can be replaced by"cardinal","pivotal"
likewise...replace your words
5`make your passage close to the topic
give some accurate examples is a good way,and don`t talk about things that have no relationship with the topic
wish you improvement~
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