ghostztx
幼苗
共回答了15个问题采纳率:86.7% 举报
"i am an 17-year olg senior middle 3 student in kao yip middle school"——an改为a
“i like planning some schedule,and start everyday according to the schedule,i think that will let me have organization.”——改为i like making plans and working according to schedule , which i think will make me well organized .
"my habby is reading, i believe reading will give me some useful things ,"——habby改为hobby,give改为teach
"i always spend a few hour for reading"——去掉for,hour变为hours
"i trust my ablity is not lose everyone,i just lose my patience"——改为i believe i won't be less talented than anyone else , i think i only lack some patience.
"my philosophy is the higher the price,the better the quality of the merchandise"——改为my philosophy is that the more expensive the goods are , the better their quality will be.
"if i pay more price will get more benefits."——改为if i spend more money , i will get more benefits.
1年前
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