一篇英语小作文,Emily刚结交了一位笔友Sally,她想写信向sally介绍一下她的家庭成员(称呼、姓名、年龄),请帮

不清楚你的年龄段,所以并不很确定应该用怎样的句型,因为题看起来像小学生的,所以用的小学生语气,如果失误,请不要介意.
Dear Sally,
I have a happy family.Look!Grace is my mommy.She is 37years old now.My dady is two years older than my mommy.His name is Tom.I think he is the best man in the world.A lovely boy Jim is 7 years old.He is my younger brother.And me,Emily,10years old.I love my family,and they love my.
Could you tell me something about your family,please?
Write my soon.
Yours,
Emily

Dear Sally,
I have a happy family.look! I have an elegant mother Grace who is 37. As to my father Tom, though he is 39 years old, he is still very handsome. And I also have a brother Jim...