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My favorite sport was football.——was改成is.
We practise three time every week and often see football matches on TV together.——time改成times.
4.5.Playing football not only make us grow up tall and strong but also gives a sense of fair play and team spirit.——make改成makes;去掉up;fair改成fairly.
6.We will always remeber when we play for the team instead of ourselves.——去掉will.
7.8.Also,a sport teaches us the important of obedience.——Also改成Moreover,a改成the.
9.Each player must obey the captain,that is the leader of the team.——that改成who.
10.You must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.——you改成we.
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