你这是要请人帮忙写推荐信吗. May I ask your help to write a recommendation letter for my application of XXX university,please? Would you please help me to write a recommendation letter for my application of XXX university?
May i ask you help me apply for ____________?please (这样用句可以吗) (1) May I ask you to help me apply for XXX? (2) Could you help me to lodge an application for XXX / submit an application to do sth (3) Would you please help me with applying for XXX ?