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China is well-known for its scenery.It is grand views,mountains,moors,lochs and hills (强调句型:it is .that.这里的that不能省略) have earned China the reputation (应改为:for one of the.) of being one of the most beautiful places on the planet!
A 30 minute(30-minute 或 30 minutes'表示“30分钟的”) drive through some parts of China can (help you 用第二人称较亲切)see the scenery literally change(表示进行中的用changing好一些) before(in front of you) your eyes,(后解释说明逗号改为冒号或破折号) from sparse,heather covered hills,to flowing,pine-tree flanked rivers.
China is famous for its history and here you will find photos of some of the finest historical sites in China,as well as some that you may not have heard of before.Photographs(少谓语动词,加个are) from some of the many(most?) beautiful towns and villages around China,all of which have their own unique character and charm.No two places are ever the same here and each place has that "little something" that sets it apart from anywhere you've been before!
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