用英语介绍自己.帮忙看一下有没有什么错误.

用英语介绍自己.帮忙看一下有没有什么错误.
Hello everyone.My name is 某某.I am fourteen years old.
I like vegetables,and i eat it everyday.But i never drink milk,i think it's awful.But my monther wants me to drink it.She says it's good for my health.
My favorite sports are running.And my favorite color is bule.
I like talking to people,so i have lots of friends,i am very happy.
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cxpcxp168 幼苗

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Hello everyone.My name is 某某.I am fourteen years old.
I like vegetables,and I eat them every day.But I never drink milk,I think it's awful.But my monther wants me to drink it.She says it's good for my health.
My favorite sport is running.And my favorite color is bule.
I like talking to people,so I have lots of friends,I am very happy.
还不错,望继续努力.

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gfing 幼苗

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Hello everyone.My name is 某某.I am fourteen years old.
I like vegetables,and i eat them everyday.But i never drink milk,i think it's awful.But my monther wants me to drink it.She says it's good for...

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达菲猫 幼苗

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1.所有的i改为I，
2.I like vegetables,and i eat them(应为复数) every day（分开写：每天）.But I have (改为现在完成时)never drunk(过去分词) milk.
3.My favorite sport（应为单数） is running.

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小狗三三 幼苗

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Hello, everyone! ...vegetables, and I eat them(不是it)... drink milk.(要用句号） I think it's awful，but my mother... My favorite sport is running, and my favorite color ...friends.(句号） I am very happy.
其他的都OK!

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niewy 幼苗

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and I eat them every day(I要大写，既然前面是vegetables，后面应是them，everyday连写相当于形容词，要分开写，后面的I都大写）。
My favorite sport is running.(这里只提到一种运动）。

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好好学习好好学习 幼苗

共回答了13个问题采纳率：92.3% 举报

不要介绍到你妈身上去，这是自我介绍。

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