Attached is the revised version, with the corrections colored in green. If you have any questions as you read through this, please feel free to contact me.
The attachment has been amended ,which is marked in green colour ,please check and approve it ,you can inform me promptly if there remains some problems .Thanks .呵呵,不晚吧,我趁着吃饭的时间给你弄下,希望能帮上你的忙!