英语段子语法修改~谢谢The past has turned into ashes. last year my gran
英语段子语法修改~谢谢
The past has turned into ashes. last year my grandfather passed away peacefully. On the day he died, he passed on me his OMEGA watch. This is great gift in my life.
secondly,the original meaning of OMEGA is infinity and also means the right time for life. So my family extremely love OMEGA watch. Use it repersent my family spirit and tradition.
Finally,things happen,people change.when I saw the OMEGA watch,I will remember my grandfather.So I decide to be a brilliant person just like my grandfather.
The past has turned into ashes. last year my grandfather passed away peacefully. On the day he died, he passed on me his OMEGA watch. This is great gift in my life.
secondly,the original meaning of OMEGA is infinity and also means the right time for life. So my family extremely love OMEGA watch. Use it repersent my family spirit and tradition.
Finally,things happen,people change.when I saw the OMEGA watch,I will remember my grandfather.So I decide to be a brilliant person just like my grandfather.
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On the day he died
改为 the day when he died
This is great gift in my life.
改为 a great gift
Use it repersent my family spirit and tradition.
直接改为 it represents my ...就可以了.
when I saw the OMEGA watch
改为 every time i see the ..
things happen,people change
我感觉意思不太.
不如说,
everyone changes with time being.随着时间的流逝,每个人都会改变.
我改的出来的就这些.你再斟酌下吧.
改为 the day when he died
This is great gift in my life.
改为 a great gift
Use it repersent my family spirit and tradition.
直接改为 it represents my ...就可以了.
when I saw the OMEGA watch
改为 every time i see the ..
things happen,people change
我感觉意思不太.
不如说,
everyone changes with time being.随着时间的流逝,每个人都会改变.
我改的出来的就这些.你再斟酌下吧.
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