英语过十二岁生日的请帖

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Dear Liuyin
Next saturday is my 12 years old birthday.i`m happy to inviet you to come to my birthday party.Would you like to come to my party?I miss you a lot,we will have a lot of games on my party,also we will eat a lot,such as birthday cake,beef and so on.The time is half past six PM,i hope you can have time to come my party.And my home's address is Culture Street 28,you can take bus 3 or take Bus 46,in the People's Park Station,Opposite the red house is my house.Say hello to your mom and dad.your`s Lihua
Dear friend,
I’m very happy,because my years old birthday will come next Saturday,And my family have many food and drink.I think a lot of funny things and we will paly　 them in that day.So I hope you can take part in.Now I will tell you the address of my house.It is in the central of our city named Funny Time.There are many trees and flowers around my home.Its wall is red and white.You must come.I’ll wite you.