【急】请修改英语句子错误,尽快,

提问几天了,还是一个回答,纳闷.也许是觉得原文写得不错吧!不过,以相互探讨为出发点,我还是表达一些建议：句子结构没太大问题,但表达方式可以再改进,使文章更流畅.
某些用词也有斟酌的余地.如：
有或含有不一定是用 had, 可以用其他同义词替代,使句子更生动.
Mastered the usage of GPS….. 你是指掌握运用GPS或其使用技巧,而usage 一般是指东西的用途、用法,所以换成 application 或use 较合适.
至于 skill,作为名词,当然复数可以加s; 不过,在a systematic geological skills training…., 这个skill 已不能当名词加s,因为training才是名词了；所以一楼的说法是对的.例子：information technologies 可以有s, information technology industry 就不能加s了.
只是一些浅见,仅供参考.
1. It’s a preliminary cognitive fieldwork of geology consisting direct knowledge of stratum, igneous rock and geomorphy (such as karst, river, delta, seashore, etc.). This geological fieldwork was an integration of theory and practice, so it was very useful in the enhancement of the thoughts and skills of fieldwork.
2. It’s a systematic geological skill training that covered a comprehensive study of the outdoor features of various stratums (也可以用复数 strata), rocks and structures (fold and fault). From the training, I had learnt the method of collecting rock samples, geological profile survey and geological mapping, as well as mastered the application of GPS PDA and mapping software. The most important benefit I had gained was the recognition of the value of teamwork and the meaning of the school motto, “Hard work and plain living; realistic and pragmatic”.
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1.direct前少a，2with practise改为by~，3skills前加the，4.第二段skills去s，5along with去掉along，with后加a，希望能帮到你